Mareike Moritz [aa]

SL Username: - 3urydic3
SL Display Name: - currently a series of rectangles


Name: - Mareike Moritz
Age: - 20s
Birthday: - January 6, c. 1600 AD
Gender: - F
Height: - 5'7
Weight: - 101
Race: Mythological
Species: Lemure
Origin: Weimar, Germany
Occupation: Streetrat/Beggar
Affiliation: none as of now

 

Spoiler:

Positive Traits:
- Sense of wit & charisma (she likes to think so)
- Patience
- Whimsy

Negative Traits:
- Poor temper
- Selfish
- Smug
- Generally not too bright
- Melodramatic

Likes:
- Soup
- Free things
- Idle chit-chat
- Uncertainty

Hobbies:
- Found art
- Lurking
- Recollecting/recounting ancient western history
- Being alone

Dislikes:
- Extreme heat
- Boredom
- Small/cramped spaces
- Being alone

Facts and Quirks:
- Occasional nosebleeds -- though since her blood is long coagulated, it's more of a black sludgelike substance.
- Very claustrophobic.
- Has studied many trades over the years; her forte is old-school farming.
- Terrified of barnyard animals.



Personal Inventory:

- An ancient relic: a bronze pendant of a dog eating its own tail, kept close to her heart.
- Spare change.
- An old nokia.
- "Artistic" materials, such as broken glass and other garbage
- A flashlight, battery-operated.
- Perfume, something like tea and honey.

Personal Property:

- A few spare clothes.
- A sleeping mat.
- A gym bag for all of the above.

Specialized Equipment:

- Nothing to speak of.



Racial Abilities:

(No affinity to speak of at this tier)

Non-Combat Abilities:

- Doesn't (really) need to eat, sleep, or breathe
- Can take an incorporeal form ("ghosting")
- Crafty (in a making-things sense)
- Crafty (in a sly sense)
- High pain tolerance - Feels less physical pain due to being generally undead; still takes the same amount of damage.

Combat Abilities:  

- Regeneration of wounds/rot (+1 minor per 3 rounds, only active in darker/colder areas, such as indoors or a dark, cloudy night)
- Improvising (primitive) weapons
- Adept with knives, shanks, axes, the like (+1 minor blade dmg)
- The ultimate last resort: run away - Ghost and flee from the scene under stealth; more often than not she'll stay in range to watch things play out, but if the situation is too dire she will make a full break for it. (there was a weeaboo joke here, ha.)



Racial Weakness:

- Outsider - Due to not being used to the worlds of Man nor Yokai, +1 minor from all sources of damage

Combat Weaknesses:

- Extra damage from holiness or darkness [+1 moderate and +1 minor, respectively]
- Slow-moving
- Fragile (easily lacerated, brittle bones, etc.) [+1 minor from any/all attacks]
- Laziness - hates fighting to begin with, puts forth little effort unless it's life or death
- Easy prey to both the demonic and the angelic
- Will begin to deteriorate when exposed to extreme heat/light [+2 minor fire attacks]

Heya! So while you filled most of the sheet right, you've messed up in a few spots "Racial" labels are only for things pertaining to your "Race". Such as the Racial Weakness for Mythological is:

Outsiders: Due to not being used to the worlds of Man nor Yokai, all Mythological creatures take +1 minor from all sources of Damage.

Please read over the detailed information in the Character Creation page where it explains most of the sections and what goes there. Racial Weaknesses and Abilities are based on what's on the Race Page only.

Please respond when you'd updated and fixed this! Thank you! Well done thus far, though!

okay, is it fixed?

You did it great! Thank you!
(Fun Fact, the Currency is Yen because Japan)

All that's left is detail on what your skills do on a mechanics standpoint.
For Example:
Extra Damage from Holy and Dark - Is it an additional minor of damage? additional moderate? Does the amount go up by a tier? or maybe it just takes double?

Just need this sort of information for all things, which are Abilities or Weaknesses. I'll list out what needs more info below. ♥

1. High pain tolerance: Does she feel less pain even though she's taking more? [Jut a description, really so we know how it works]
   
   
2. Regenerate Wounds: How much and in how many rounds? [A round is a full cycle of post order]
   
   
3. Adept with knives, axes, shanks, etc.: I take it this is bladed weapons. Does this give her any bonus damage when using a blade?
   
   
4. Run Away: Just give us some information as to what this is? Is it like hitting retreat in an RPG and you automatically leave the scene if not stopped?
   
   
5. Extra Damage from Holy and Dark: Is it an additional minor of damage? additional moderate? Does the amount go up by a tier? or maybe it just takes double?
   
   
6. Fragile: Do they take extra damage from combat in general?
   
   
7. Will begin to deteriorate when exposed to extreme heat/light: Would they take extra damage from fire?

I know it's a lot of questions BUT I know you can do it! Im here if you need help!

(haaaa yeah that makes sense)
Thank you very much actually all this helps a lot with fleshing out the character because she's still very... skeletal? framework-y? yeah.

how's it look now?

Wonderful! The last thing I'd do is for the regen, make it 1 minor per 3 rounds, not 2 minimal. Minimal is just cosmetic damage for RP sake.

donezo!